UFS 211 - TASK 10

Post the complete Folklore Story on your own blog.

Group Member

1. Eddy Wong Khang Soon
2. Mohammad Ali Jamaha
3. Nursina Sabar
4. Norfadhilah Romzi
5. Wilfred Edward Tamin
6. Rahmat Nur Putra Lubis

A Story about 'Coconut Tree'

    This story is about a man was name Ali. Ali was married with the person he loves, Qaqa. Their was living in happiness until the day that Qaqa's friend name Manja come to visited her. They was starting story about their life after married. Qaqa was felt excited after hear the story about Manja's life, it is because Manja's husband is a rich and also have a successful job. Ali was listening their conversation without Qaqa knows. Ali was felt upset and useless because he can't give his wife a better life. He thinks his was a failure and he ask for help from his friend, Fred and Cho. Cho was told Ali about there are an old man who can achieve wishes. So, three of them was go to find the an old man. This an old man name Yu is always stay under the tree shades. After Ali told Yu that he wanna became a useful man and earns a lot of money so he can give her wife a better life, Yu gave Ali a magic box. Before their going, the wise man told Ali do not open the box until he reach home. But on the way back home, Fred ask Ali to open the box to see what is inside the box. Suddenly, something happen to them. Ali and his friend was turned into a coconut trees because disobeying the wise man says. Yet turned into coconut tree still fulfilled Ali wish to be an useful man since coconut tree has various function for making bridge or raft, drinks and leafs for roof and many more.

UFS 211 - TASK 9

Summarize the text given by the lecturer and post in it your blog.

    There are few ways in machine of lie detector can be used. Firstly, it can be used without a subject's knowledge has been introduced in Britain. The Dektor psychological stress analysis (PSE) was used by private industry for pre-employment screening, investigating thefts and even periodic staff checks. This device is used for pre-employment interviews, with questions such as 'Have you used marihuana?' and for monthly checks with branch manager, asking question like 'Do you suspect any present employees of cheating the company?'. It which at least prevents a manager from setting his own pace to investigate possibly suspicious behaviour. Secondly, it also can be used to probe a whole range of personal issues totally unrelated to job. Lastly, this also can be used without the subject knowing. It's inventors analysed the televised Watergate hearings and told the press who are they thought was lying. However, the are also an objections to it's use. First of all, one of the other two units was being employed by a private firm for pre-employment checks. It also possible to pick out a word or phrase that caused stress. Lastly, its a primary application will be in situations where people may not object such as pre-employment interviews.

UFS 211 - TASK 8

Based on the movie that you have watched in the class, retell the story in your way and if you were the main character, what would you do if you were experiencing the same situation?

    The story is all about a new man as he rode the stranded airline crash. This happens because the aircraft was experiencing problems due to bad weather with heavy rain and thunderstorms. At the crash in the Pacific Ocean, he was safe because he got a floating boat and eventually landed on a deserted island. Other crew members was died. He looking around the island and try to find someone. Unfortunately the island is not in inhabited. He tried to find a way to get help. He carved the word "HELP" on the sand, but the next day it disappeared. So he decided to collect enough wood to make the "HELP" word from there. After all done, he tried to find something that he can drink and eat. He found coconut and had broke to open the coconut on the stone and drink the juice. In an effort to find other things, he walked around the island and the climb the hill. When he was on the hill, he found someone lying in the water and rushed got it. When he close it was someone of their staff. She took him to the island and he took shoes and flashlight from him. Then he buried the dead and write epitath on the stone. He also found a cave on the side of the island. Every time it rains, he is hiding in the cave. He made a friend and he call them name is Wilson ball that he got from fedex package that he was chosen by the beach. After four years later, he had lived there. He can catch fish and crabs with spears that have been made by himself. He was always trying to get from the island, but the waves are too strong and always take him back to the island. Finally, he gathers the wood from the forest as much as he could and made his own raft. He began to sail through the ocean. He has successfully escape from the large waves of the island. When he was in the middle of the sea, suddenly rain with thunder storms. But he was lucky because the raft is not badly damaged. Not long after that, while he was in a state of unconsciousness on a raft, a large ship carrying containers save him and finally he was able to return to his country.
    If I was the main character, I would try to find much alternative to returning as soon as possible. I do not want to live alone on the island too long, its was silent and gruesome. To support myself lived alone on a deserted island, I would try to find some food to eat and drink to resume my life. I want to make a weapon for catching fish or crabs, and to defend themselves from wild animals. I would also like to make a hut for me to take shelter, to protect themselves from the heat and bad weather. However, I will try my best to make a strong watercraft to cross the ocean to get out of there.

UFS 211 - TASK 7

Paragraph Writing

My Unforgettable Childhood Memories

    Everyone in the world must has their own unforgettable childhood memories in their life. Unforgettable childhood memories was something that we can't or never be forget in our mind forever. I'm also have my own memories when I was kid that will I never be forget until now. I has so much unforgettable memories but this is the one that I will never be forget. It was my 5th birthday party celebration and it's also for the first time in my life was celebrate. I'm still remember that the party was celebrate in my house at Makkasar, Indonesia. It's because I was be grew up at Indonesia. I felt very happy and excited when my parents told me that they wants to make a party for my birthday celebration. I was invited all my friends and their family to come. Lots of balloons at corner in our living room and it was very beautiful. At night, I was wearing a short white gown and I felt like a princess. There so many guest was come to celebrate my birthday and their also gave me a lots of gift. My mom also cook so many food and prepare drink for my guest. My parents buys a big of cake for my birthday and it was a cuties cake that I ever seen. Before I blew the candle their was sang a birthday song for me. After the party was over, I not forget to gave a some food for my guest for bring back to their home. For me, this is the unforgettable childhood memories that I will never forget.

UFS 211 - TASK 6

What are the common mistakes that you always do in writing? Do you find writing in English is difficult? What kind of problem do you face when you start writing? What are your suggestions to overcome the problem? Discuss.

There are always have mistakes when we do something, it is just like when I do a mistake in my writing. The most common mistake that I'm always do in my writing is spelling errors. It always happen in all my writing. I think it was a little bit difficult write in English because I'm lack in English skill. I'm also facing a problem when I start to write. I was hard to find the starting words in my first paragraph. Sometimes, I do not have an idea to write and I'm still confuse to using the past tense and present tense. But I'm also try my best to facing that problem with read and check back all the spelling carefully. I'm also have lots of reading about a good writing and always make a practice in writing.

UFS 211 - TASK 5

Write a paragraph about a topic on 'Water Pollution' and come out with the appropriate Topic Sentences, Supporting Sentences and Concluding Sentences with the linker used in the paragraph.

Water pollution is any chemical, physical or biological change in the quality of water that has a harmful effect on any living thing that drinks or uses or lives in it. When humans drink polluted water it often has serious effects on their health. Water pollution can also make water unsuited for the desired use. The effects of water pollution are varied. They include poisonous drinking water, poisonous food animals, unbalanced river and lake ecosystems that can no longer support full biological diversity, deforestation from acid rain and many other effects. These effects are of course specific to the various contaminants. Science provides many practical solutions to minimizing the present level at which pollutants are introduced into the environment. In our everyday lives, a great deal can be done to minimize pollution if we take care to recycle materials whose production creates pollution and if we act responsibly with household chemicals and their disposal. Additionally, there are choices we make each day that also can affect the quantity of pollutants our actions will introduce into the environment. Heavily packaged foods, for instance, contain boxes, cartons, bottles made with polluting dyes, many of which are released from groundwater at municipal land fills. Whether we choose to drive to the corner store rather than walk or ride a bicycle will determine how much we personally contribute to acid and hydrocarbon emissions to the atmosphere. In the end, there are many choices on the personal and societal level that we must make that affect the amount of pollution our town or country will be forced to live with. Without taking a step backward in terms of our standards of living, the answer seems to lie in a combination of many small changes in our daily practices and paying more for goods and services.

Topic sentences : red

Supporting sentences: blue
Concluding sentences: orange

UFS 211 - TASK 4

In your own words, describe the stages of 'Writing Process'. Provide example of the topic sentences, supporting sentences and concluding sentences.

Topic Sentences 

- To be an effective CEO requires certain characteristics.

Supporting Sentences

- Nature has a perfect system for recycling water. That is, water is used again and again. It falls as rain. Then it goes one of the three places, it may seep slowly into the thick soil as it soaks through into the natural reservoirs quickly. It might run off into streams to rivers to the oceans. In short, the chain of changes goes on and on systematically.

Concluding Sentences

- So, the teachers can learn to be devoted, to have a strong will, and how to be reliable from their students.